这两个英语句子有错误吗?如果有,该怎样修改?1\It's an opportunity that let us become more clever and independent.2\Someboby spent much time on social practice so that his study was in neglected.第一句 老师圈了THAT 第二句 老

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这两个英语句子有错误吗?如果有,该怎样修改?1\It''sanopportunitythatletusbecomemorecleverandindependent.2\Somebobyspentmuch

这两个英语句子有错误吗?如果有,该怎样修改?1\It's an opportunity that let us become more clever and independent.2\Someboby spent much time on social practice so that his study was in neglected.第一句 老师圈了THAT 第二句 老
这两个英语句子有错误吗?如果有,该怎样修改?
1\It's an opportunity that let us become more clever and independent.
2\Someboby spent much time on social practice so that his study was in neglected.
第一句 老师圈了THAT
第二句 老师圈了ON
(但我肯定 spend some time on sth 是没错的!)
就这样作文扣多几分。对成绩有影响啊。

这两个英语句子有错误吗?如果有,该怎样修改?1\It's an opportunity that let us become more clever and independent.2\Someboby spent much time on social practice so that his study was in neglected.第一句 老师圈了THAT 第二句 老
严格来讲是没有错误(刚刚我漏写了个没,太粗心了),但是更多的是不地道,就是说太汉化了,是从汉语直接翻译的中式英语,真正的英语不是这么讲的.
It's an opportunity for us to become more clever and independent.
Somebody who spent much time on social pracices made his study neglected.
老师把on圈起来可能是没有注意到你后面用的名词practice,这个是有点区别的,因为社会实践更多是强调动作,用in doing 更好一点,你的也没有错.
ps:关于老师把that也圈一下我觉得是主谓语的问题.在汉语里我们可以说“机会使我们怎样怎样”但是这个“使”不是“使动”的意思,是“致使”的意思,你句中的that指的是opportunity,that做了let的主语,就是说是opportynity做了let的主语,而us是宾语,这在英语语法里是不妥当的.而且let多用在祈使句中,这里用make比较好.
其实关键不是老师给你批改的问题,老师只看整体,有时候他画在哪里不一定就是说那里有问题.每一次考试都不是最后一次考试,但是每一次都应该有进步,学习就要精益求精啊.

你自己写的吧~呵呵,没什么问题的,可以
虽然不是很地道,但是写作文是可以了,因为学生作文就是把老师说的语法用上就很好了,你的句型用得不错

1.It's an opportunity (which,that均可) let us become more clever and independent. (没有错,但是 好像最好用which,但是原因忘记了)
2.Someboby spent much time on social practice so that his study was in neglected(没有错)

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1.It's an opportunity (which,that均可) let us become more clever and independent. (没有错,但是 好像最好用which,但是原因忘记了)
2.Someboby spent much time on social practice so that his study was in neglected(没有错)
应该是这样的。。。。
针对补充:
1.THAT 改为which,因为这是非限制定语从句中,指物只能用which
2.spend sometime on sth
spend sometime in doing sth
这个肯定是老师批改错了,我敢保证。不过书写潦草就是你的问题喽,呵呵

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