帮我看下这篇英语文章有什么语法方面的错误或者有什么需要更改 Last winter holiday.I went to Beijing by plane.I’m so excited when I got to Beijing.At that time ,Beijing was very cold.I wore 5 clothes together .But I felt co

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帮我看下这篇英语文章有什么语法方面的错误或者有什么需要更改Lastwinterholiday.IwenttoBeijingbyplane.I’msoexcitedwhenIgottoBeijing.A

帮我看下这篇英语文章有什么语法方面的错误或者有什么需要更改 Last winter holiday.I went to Beijing by plane.I’m so excited when I got to Beijing.At that time ,Beijing was very cold.I wore 5 clothes together .But I felt co
帮我看下这篇英语文章有什么语法方面的错误或者有什么需要更改
Last winter holiday.I went to Beijing by plane.I’m so excited when I got to Beijing.
At that time ,Beijing was very cold.I wore 5 clothes together .But I felt cold also.
Beijing is a busy city .I could saw cars and people everywhere .
First day,I went to see the Tian’ an men .There were many people over there.How big was there There were many plants over there .What a beautiful place And made me surprised ,there were many red flags over there.
Second day,I went to the Palace Museum .There was very big and beautiful.
Beijing was so beautiful .I want to watch it again.

帮我看下这篇英语文章有什么语法方面的错误或者有什么需要更改 Last winter holiday.I went to Beijing by plane.I’m so excited when I got to Beijing.At that time ,Beijing was very cold.I wore 5 clothes together .But I felt co
.I’m so excited  改为 I was excited .
But I felt cold also.改为 But  I still  felt cold.
I could saw cars and people everywhere . 改为 I could  see cars and people everywhere
First day  改为 On the  first  day  

How big was there  ! How big  it  was !
And made me surprised . 改为 And  to my  surprise 
Second day   改为  On the  second day
There was very big and beautiful. 改为 It was very big and beautiful.
I want to watch it again.  改为 I want to visit  it  again .





 

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Last winter holiday. I went to Beijing by plane. I’m so excited when I got to Beijing.
At that time , Beijing was very cold. I wore 5 suits of clothes together . But I felt cold al...

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Last winter holiday. I went to Beijing by plane. I’m so excited when I got to Beijing.
At that time , Beijing was very cold. I wore 5 suits of clothes together . But I felt cold also.
Beijing is a busy city . I could saw cars and people everywhere .
On the first day, I went to see the Tian’ an men . There were many people over there. How big was there ! There were many plants over there . What a beautiful place ! That made me surprised. there were many red flags over there.
On the Second day,I went to the Palace Museum . it was very big and beautiful.
Beijing was so beautiful . I want to watch it again.

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