请高手帮忙看看下面这段话有什么问题没,修改下,本人的写作The music of Enigma is beyond our imagination.The band you may have heard is fromGemany.The Song called Return To Innocence(返璞归真 )may impress you during the 1996

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请高手帮忙看看下面这段话有什么问题没,修改下,本人的写作ThemusicofEnigmaisbeyondourimagination.ThebandyoumayhaveheardisfromGeman

请高手帮忙看看下面这段话有什么问题没,修改下,本人的写作The music of Enigma is beyond our imagination.The band you may have heard is fromGemany.The Song called Return To Innocence(返璞归真 )may impress you during the 1996
请高手帮忙看看下面这段话有什么问题没,修改下,本人的写作
The music of Enigma is beyond our imagination.The band you may have heard is from
Gemany.The Song called Return To Innocence(返璞归真 )may impress you during the 1996 Atlanta Olympics .
The music of Enigma,which is a mystery,which is hard to describe,which is
fascinating.
The mystic style has attracted numerous fans.The themes express with modern electronic music,which makes us feel time-interleaved(时空交错).I recommend this song,The Social Song.

请高手帮忙看看下面这段话有什么问题没,修改下,本人的写作The music of Enigma is beyond our imagination.The band you may have heard is fromGemany.The Song called Return To Innocence(返璞归真 )may impress you during the 1996
小改一稿,见笑,最后一句没理解其句子含义和成分,所以没修改.
The music of Enigma,a band you may have heard from Gemany,is beyond our imagination..A song called "Return To Innocence (返璞归真 )" may have impressed you during the Atlanta Olympics in 1996.
The music of Enigma is a mystery,which is fascinating and hard to describe.
Their mystic style has attracted numerous fans,of which themes are expressed with modern electronic music,making us feel time-interleaved (时空交错).I highly recommend this song,The Social Song.

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